I've take and incorporated a lot of the comments received (a big THANK YOU to those of you who read and sent me notes--you know who you are) and hope this adds a little more dimension to the initial chapter.
I'm prepping for ReaderCON in July, so please feel free to comment more. I'm always open for feedback.
Pay special attention to the opening...I'm hoping the 'hook' is better and might generate a little more excitement.
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