Sunday, June 6, 2010

New version of Chapter One

Off to the right is a link to download a .PDF file of what I hope is a 'New and Improved' version of the 'Prodigal's Foole - Chapter One.'

I've take and incorporated a lot of the comments received (a big THANK YOU to those of you who read and sent me notes--you know who you are) and hope this adds a little more dimension to the initial chapter.

I'm prepping for ReaderCON in July, so please feel free to comment more. I'm always open for feedback.

Pay special attention to the opening...I'm hoping the 'hook' is better and might generate a little more excitement.


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